Ode to Sare Agama

by icanbefixed

Published February 17, 2010

In Poetry

We were in chat, and I decided to write in haikus... This is something I spun up, quickly and talented-ly. (lol)

I think Sare's a beast,
we all know it's true, correct?
we must raise our hands.

(in agreement)

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fire_of_dawn
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fire_of_dawn commented Comment · Feb 19, 2010

People are writing poetry about my sister?
I was not informed of this! Just kidding. A very well-written poem.

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fiction903
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fiction903 wrote a review Review · Feb 18, 2010

You have an interesting poem. I hope you entered it in the writing Olympics. It is so vague thought I think you could change the second line around a little so it describes the topic. I have never heard of something being a haiku and an ode at the same time. Its a unique concept.Other than being extremely vague I think you did well. Keep writing and have a great night. Fiction



The very worst use of time is to do very well what need not be done at all.
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