Wow. That was great! I've read three of your other pieces, and none of them exceed this one. This was a brilliantly written poem. I. Loved. This. Poem. I really did. If you like things about death, you should check out my poem Death and my short story Afterlife. Death is in Horror and Afterlife is in Supernatural. They are both almost as dark as this poem, but not quite as much. Just thought you'd like to check 'em out!
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