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You did Wolf pack research! you have no idea how many people put wolves in their story and NOT research (No one on on this site I know of.)
Intersting and kept me reading, and the cliff hanger was as annoying as it should be, you left us hanging! looking forward to reading the next one.
Oooh! Way to leave me hanging!!
I only noticed a few errors.
"What if they get back soon, but?" - I think maybe you mean 'But what if they get back soon?' ? Unless you mean for her to speak that way.
"Jasmine barked a laugh. Why do you girls find the need to put whipped cream on everything?" The thought wasn't italicized.
But other than that, I didn't notice anything! Good job!!
*15 minute applause which never stops because of the awesomeness of this chapter.*