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Great job with the beginning! I loved it! Your doing a great job with the story! Keep up the great work
The beginning is eye-catching indeed. It urges the readers to read more. A fantasy-based story, along with action and suspense. It's something everybody likes. The description is not too much or too little; just right. I'd say this story has exactly what the young readers of our generation are searching for.