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So your first paragraph was great. brilliant description. but right when you got to the point of talking its was just terrible. there is no expression in your words when the characters are talking perfect description of your surroundings whats going on and the looks of your characters. work on making your characters voice pop out of the book. Keep that pencil Flowin!