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by fight4whatisright

Published December 6, 2010

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FelixWindbow
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FelixWindbow wrote a review Review · Dec 7, 2010

Hi! I am here like I promised!
This chapter was a good one. It was the part where the boy meets the girl. One of the most important parts.
I like how joshua knows her. And, the cause of battle was in this chapter. Also very important.
You did a real good job. Although I am not a swearer, not all people arn't.
Anyway, great job, and I hope that chapter four will be posted sooner than later!
Kudos!
Felix Windbow.



If you pick up a starving dog and make him prosperous, he will not bite you; that is the principal difference between a dog and a man.
— Mark Twain