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Tue Apr 05, 2011 4:56 pm
borntobeawriter wrote a review...



Hey there Fighta,

Well, now I'm really confused. I was going to read this because it's got no reviews, but I know I've read this before. Have you edited?

Well, I don't have any nitpicks. I thought this was good, the action and dialogue flowed well.

I was slightly confused at the beginning, but I quickly back into the skin of the MC. Kudos to you for that.

Let me know when you post more, okay?

Tanya





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