(I think this stanza can stand alone...however they were others that went with it that I've also posted it up, but I think this one is the best and since it seems to me to be able to stand on it's own as a poem, we'll call it the short version of E'in Sof.
It is 3 am and the black sky
overhead resembles a snake,
onyx coils poised to strike. I am
Cleopatra and these pearls will
prove my noose. E'in Sof.
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Very pretty.
Sounds nice!
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thank ya muchly for the comment!
Ooh, I like this, especially the "onyx coils poised to strike" bit. Good stuff.
I think, yeah, you're right, it can stand alone.
Muffin