Young Writers Society

Hello! I'm Ava
I came across your poem and I couldn't help but write a review because this is so beautifully written!!
I'm kind of going through a hard time and getting confused with the decisions I made. I was almost convinced that I had made a mistake but reading your poem gave me hope again.

The use of words and and incorporating the accurate sayings perfectly into a piece of literature and making it so wisely meaningful was brilliant. I could see that you put a lot of thought into this piece.
What really caught my attention was how you justified how most outcomes of our deeds are because of us realistically contrasting the sayings. Last two lines just left me in awe. The entire piece is powerful enough to make a indecisive person believe in what he's doing.


Thank you again for this beautiful piece
Have a great day!

This is such a lovely piece of writing it is taking what we have heard throughout life and questioning and spiting them. Taking life in your grasp and truly realizing fate is in your hands.

Hello, My Friend!

This is a fascinating bit of poetry. It feels like a clash of old and modern wisdom, a challenge to the "all-encompassing" treatment that so many of the old adages are treated with. A contrast between what you can control in your life, like determination and knowing when to act, to what can't be controlled, such as time itself and even the elusive concept of luck.

*ahem as for a more technical review, I have nothing to complain about. I love your rhyme scheme, and everything is very well-written. Great work there ~

It would be hard to choose a favorite line, but if I had to...

But fortune cookie proverbs don't make wishes come true, really ever,

It is the hands of the clock that map out the ripples of each endeavor.

As the seconds pass, what you do with life and all its worth is up to you.

A really awesome poem written by the author.

"Wisdom can't quantify words that are read or reverberate adages from the dead.
"Rome wasn't built in a day" and "When in Rome do as the Romans do"
As the seconds pass, what you do with life and all its worth is up to you."
The three last lines are the most powerful lines of this poem. This shows how practical and mature the author is regarding his/her life. I love the rhyme scheme of this poem.

It is true, what you do with your life is in your hands. Everybody gets a life but there are only a few who know how to use it properly, we all can get into that list of a few but "No pain, no gain".

Nice work, keep it up.
Waiting for more.
Thank you.