Hi anngelalu!
I really like the simplicity of the poem and its shape , which reinforces the feeling of the speaker by keeping the speaker's feelings to the left hand side.
I feel the repetition of the poem keeps the pace slow which magnifies the small details ' colours,''step', and 'beat' and 'rhythm.
However I feel you could provide examples - what is the colour in that the other person provides for the speaker?
what step causes the colours to fade?
It might be an idea to also write another stanza to explain how you feed the other person's worth as I am curious as the reader.
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