Hello there and Happy Review day! I'm a poetry novice who's looking to improve her skill by reading and reviewing other people's writing.
I thought the imagery in this was really hard hitting, although I'm having trouble liking the poem to the title. I thought the flow was good and I liked the structure. As far as meaning is concerned, I felt that this poem reminded me of someone who is lost or trapped and unable to escape from the world they've given up on. There aren't any bits I particularly dislike or have a problem with, so I'll probably end the review here. Sorry it's so short, I couldn't think of much to say.
Keep writing!
Ebony
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