Hey, Tiana here for a review. AGAIN. Haha.
Okay, I love the format. I've never seen it look like that before, I must admit it looks good!
Is there symbolism behind the sudden format change?
I'd like to comment on the correlation between all 3 poems, or lack thereof.
I can't seem to find a real link between the poems, like forget, forgive, and rejuvenate? It would have been much better if the titles told a story themselves...
Individually, these poems are awesome, well, #1 and #3 anyways.
What do you mean by "the youth and us"? Do you and 'us' classify as youth or a division outside of youth?
- Tiana
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