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You did a really good job with this! I can feel the narraters desire to close the gap vary well.
I don't really have much else to say. Keep up the good work Anna91423.
~Wolf
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This piece is really interesting - the thought that they are so close, yet so far!
The fourth and fifth paragraph in the poem conveys the feeling very well, that there is this need to come closer together, yet the need is left, not taken care of.
The title encapsulates the entire mood of the poem extremely well, and gives the main idea really well! I know, this is a short review, but I really love the poem! Keep up the good work!
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First off I would like to say that this was a great piece and I found what appears to be a spelling error. You typed "But still I can feel every millimetre" and i think you where looking for millimeter. Other than that it was a good piece. I hope this helps a little.
Actually, it either goes as 'millimetre' or 'millimeter'. Your 'millimeter' is the American spelling.