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Hey this is a beautiful poem. And the "ABBA" rhyming scheme makes this quite fit for a song. I actually hummed it from the start to the end and it fits perfect. I like how you've always stuck to your idea of 'running to the start' which is a metaphor for so many things..
Well done and keep that up!
Sounds pretty good to me but I just wish it wasn't about running track... I can't relate to it that much because I do not run track... I don't do any sports actually... But I do like it!
Hey Anna!
I have nothing to nit-pick at or anything, I loved it.
I realllyy really liked this. It's really beautifully written, I like the imagery and everything. Mostly I'm feeling your angst right now hehe