Running from your Smile

by anna91423

Published October 12, 2012

In A Therapy of Sorts...

I thought I’d escaped you this time,
but you’re chasing my thoughts today.
I keep trying to run away
and keep finding the starting line.
 
 
 
It feels like a long time ago,
your blue youthful eyes mature now,
but they still remind me somehow
of then. All the highs and the lows.
 
No-one told me the running track
doesn’t care how hard I train
or how fast I sprint in my lane,
it will always lead me back
 
to you. Back where we first begun,
when your smile was enough
to make me believe in love.
When life was all about fun.
 
 
 
I’m waiting for the whistle blow,
here at the starting line again.
Another race and day, story the same.
One, two, three. Ready, Steady, Go!
 
I’m trying to outrun my heart.
I’m trying to outrun your smile.
But the track leads round and round, a cycle.
I’m only running to the start.
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Arcticus wrote a review Review · Dec 8, 2012

Hey this is a beautiful poem. And the "ABBA" rhyming scheme makes this quite fit for a song. I actually hummed it from the start to the end and it fits perfect. I like how you've always stuck to your idea of 'running to the start' which is a metaphor for so many things..

Well done and keep that up!

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BunnyRabbit12 wrote a review Review · Oct 14, 2012

Sounds pretty good to me but I just wish it wasn't about running track... I can't relate to it that much because I do not run track... I don't do any sports actually... But I do like it!

unsocialbutterfly wrote a review Review · Oct 13, 2012

Hey Anna!
I realllyy really liked this. It's really beautifully written, I like the imagery and everything. Mostly I'm feeling your angst right now hehe :) I have nothing to nit-pick at or anything, I loved it.



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