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Thank You all

The short description of this story makes it sound really interesting, I've never read anything like this and trust me I've read more than 100 books this year.(bookworm!) I really want to know what the door leads Bronte to and if her and her sister will ever get back to there Aunt. I also wonder if the Aunt knows about this mysterious door they find.
I don't really get the title but if it makes since to you then I'm fine with it. This is good writing for someone your age and good luck on your other stories!!

This is a really good short description for someone your age and I like the story. Sounds like it'll be packed with action

Hello TazmaniaGirl!

I like what I see so far story wise, a lot actually. The story reaches towards me and intrigues me enough to want to keep reading about Bronte while also giving me thoughts about what the door could possibly be leading her towards. Even though this is only a brief description of what's about to happen, it gives enough information that the reader will be wanting to know what's happening as well as giving a small enough portion of knowledge that not that much is actually spoiled.

The main problem I see with this work has nothing to do with storytelling and everything to do with punctuation. If Wood Dreams Description was read aloud then there wouldn't be a single thing wrong with it. However, as a literary story it needs to have some boundaries on how the knowledge of the story is told. Remember, while all works have to be true to the heart they also need to try to grab our brains and imaginations. Next time you write try to think about every little detail, even the ones which might seem artificial.

The main punctuation problems that glared themselves upon me were that of the word "there" and the capitalization of the word "very." I realize that this may seem a little bit silly to scrutinize, and trust me, all writers have similar problems when they're your age, but still these are things to have your eye watch out for. All of the different forms of the word "there," "their," and "they're" are some of the most popular terms in the English Language. Even someone confuses the spellings of the words, generally the meaning is clear enough that the reader can see tell what's supposed to be happening. Nonetheless, it's important that the correct form is used, just for extra clarity and the fact that it helps you look more researched or knowledge in whatever subject you're writing about.

Now let's get on to the capitalization of the word "very." It's obvious the word has importance and places emphasis onto the words surrounding it, but that should be clear on it's own. If a word is important in a piece of writing, it should be easy to tell that it's important without any tricks. Making all of the letters in a word capitalized makes them seem as if the word is meant to be screamed at the reader in a tone different from the rest of the word.

Besides those two criticisms (which are relatively minor), there aren't that many problems with this work for someone your age. Good job, and and good luck with your other writings!

Ben Dietz