Hello StealTheWorld! ^___^ It's me, ILoveBooks ready to review one of your awesome poem on Review day. Whoa, so that's one long poem but it was actually fun to read it.
Anyway I forgot to tell you...
Happy Review Day!
Yeah I like to greet peo poo le like that and such.
First of all congratulation for making a poem here in YWS. It wasn't your first try but this is the first time I saw your poem. And I am glad that I stop by and read your masterpiece. So this are the kind of poems I wanna read because seriously, they really spoke to me and actually inspire me on writing stuff. They actually give me hope to keep moving forward on doing stuff. Even if the poem is a bit dark and such. I am the kind of person who really thought of bad things and going on a wrong path and one of your poem caught ny attention to read and give me ways to actually become positive about stuff to twll you the truth.
I can relate to your depressive poem. I was actually wondering if you actually feel depress that's why you are writing something like this or you just want to write something pretty dark that actually can relate to other people. I suffer a l ot of anxiety and depression and no one actually knows about it. And when I wrote poems that are dark I ended up being bitter instead. And when I read this I almost cry because this show so much emotions for me.
Your poem is incredible. It spoke to me Like a person.
I love your poem structure and the rhythm. It give the simple flow but yet wonderful one. It give so much and big emotions to readers like me. So yeah that's a mega plus point to be honest.
When I read the beginning I was already caught and hooked. Like it won't stop me from reading. Your words of choice are amazing.
"One cut. Two cuts. Three cuts. Four." Are the one really caught me. I thought I was in the poem itself.
Anyway thats all for now. Ihope you write more like this that inspire other readers and writers like me on writing poems like this keep it up and well done.
Hapoy Review Day!
-ILoveBooks
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