Top Notch!
This, unlike the previous poem's of yours I have reviewed, has a rather restful theme, and the rhythm works really well, and I would go as far as to say it is your writting style, I am talking about the single unrealated clauses that add up to a whole theme. I particularly "Broken dreams. Poisoned streams" and "Puppet strings." because of the fantastic imagery they conjour up.
Keep on writing!
Take That You Fiend!
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