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by Ravena

Published November 24, 2025

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Ravena
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Stickied · Ravena commented Comment · Nov 24, 2025

Text version here!

**also, the tone is supposed to be me asking the questions, and then "answering" with just what I've learned—I just don't want anybody getting the idea that this is, like, taking any (valid!) questions a reader might have and then attacking them, or anything like that. I know faith is just a touchy subject for some people, and I don't want this to be taken as anything more than a reflection of my personal journey, that's all! <33

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“How can He answer every prayer?
There are billions, it’s not possible.”
It’s because of time you think this.
But how can time exist without Him?
What is time, beyond our perception?
If a being can exist beyond time
And beyond matter, space, or scale
Is there any amount of prayers
That he could not respond to?
You believe what humans tell you
About the distortion of time and matter
By dead stars and black holes above
How, then, is it so hard to believe
That He or his kingdom could exist
In a distortion even more intricate

“How can His word be law to us?
The Book changes and contradicts.”
The Book was not written by Him
Nor by his Son, nor the Angels
It was the human interpretation
And humans are flawed beings
It’s natural, they mix things up
They inject their biases as well
Often without even realizing it
In truth, His word could be seamless
But the Book never had a chance
As long as it was written by humans
Thus, it is the collective little flaws
That makes it feel even more real

“No one has seen Him, nor angels…
How can I believe what I cannot see?”
You believe in the gravity of Earth
But you cannot see that gravity
You believe in the air we breathe
But you cannot see that either
You cannot see God from here
However, just look all around us
Look at the phenomena I mentioned
Look at life, and its very existence—
Bodies, cells, molecules, then atoms
Then what is there, but more questions?
How is there autonomy, or capacity for faith?
I believe even many scientists can attest
That there is something beyond matter

“If He truly loves and cares for us all,
How can evil still exist, even to believers?”
Simple: humans can abuse freedom
To commit atrocities unto eachother
So too can humans abuse the free will
That was passed on to them by Him
As children can defy their parents
Humans can defy Him just as easily
All the while, as we believe he exists
So too does His opponent, in Oblivion
Who will take advantage of the vulnerable
To corrupt the word, to punish the faithful
All of this together, it’s true that sometimes
Terrible things happen, even in His name
However, our bad choices do not define Him

“Am I not irredeemable to Him by now?
I’ve cursed and mocked him for so long.”
A firm no—you are never beyond saving
His Son ate with the sinners and Lepers
Welcomed the lost, challenged the faithful
Preached that there would be more celebration
To reclaim one lost, than to bolster many found
Take this to heart, and think of it strongly
The core of His teaching is not rejection
It is forgiveness, and it is redemption
It is to save souls, not to condemn them
We may hate the sin, but we love the sinner
Even if they never come to believe Him
Even if we stand firm in our convictions
The core value is still love over transgression

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Tikaya wrote a review Review · Dec 11, 2025

Hi Ravena 😊

I rly think those lines are a very good explanation:

That He or his kingdom could exist
In a distortion even more intricate

Like it would make sense that a spaceless, timeless being can do an infinite number of things with literally no time passing.

I don’t rly buy the explanation of “the book is not the true word” bc someone as powerful as god could easily fix that. Or at least sent someone to correct the awful stuff he didn’t agree with. And this? “That makes it feel even more real“ I feel this just makes it make it more obvious that this cannot be true.

“How can I believe what I cannot see?” this is a common fallacy. We can still see the effects of gravity and air we breathe. There is some form of measurement there. We cannot measure god or any religious influence except for what ppl say. It cannot be replicated, that is the problem. You cannot make predictions with god in mind and therefore you cannot use it to built your life around it. I mean, you can obviously and lotsa ppl do, but with varying results that enough ppl aren’t ready to accept :shrug:

And this, this is the most fascinating thing out there: “That there is something beyond matter” I am so excited for what we’re going to find out abt that! I love these questions even if they scare me sometimes at night. I really like following scientific discoveries just for knowing what else out there is possible. I find the explanation of “god did it” always kinda… hollow and boring. As if anything we figure out isn’t special anymore.

I feel like if everyone did exactly as Jesus preached, the world would be a much better place, no matter what they would call the religion/laws they would follow with that in mind.

Ah agree shaping this as a cross is a cool thing, thanks for pointing this out Hkumar and Alex =D Makes it more obvious we’re talking abt the usual Christian god when other religions say similar things and are just as fascinating :3

Ravena replied · Dec 11, 2025

Hiya, Tika!! Thanks so much for your insight and review, much appreciated! :D

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Hkumar wrote a review Review · Nov 30, 2025

I loved this, especially your choice of formatting it in the shape of a cross. It makes the theme feel more authentic and adds a strong visual impact for readers. I'm not a Christian myself, but a follower of my own faith, and I completely agree that all religious books can contain human flaws. They're written through human interpretation, and naturally we all bring our own imperfections, biases, and conflicting thoughts.

I also agree with your point that if we see ourselves as children of God, then just as children sometimes defy their parents, humans too have a habit of defying the divine,and that can bring the evil into the world. History is full of such incidents, and even today we see terrible deeds committed in the name of religion all across theworld, but as you mentioned, these acts do not define the God behind them.

Your reminder that God's message is ultimately about love, forgiveness, and redemption really stood out to me. I especially loved the final paragraph. It brings hope to every life, even to those who have rejected Him or seen themselves as sinners. No matter someone's past, they are never beyond being forgiven or accepted.

Ravena replied · Dec 1, 2025

I'm so glad you were able to enjoy this poem!! Truth is, I'm not even sure if I am a full-fledged Christian yet, but I'd be lying if I said I don't have questions, and these were just some that were answered. So, still Agnostic on paper I guess, but hoping that might change lol

Thank you so much for your kind review!! :D <3

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AlexWrites commented Comment · Nov 24, 2025

Formatting this as a cross? GENIUS

Ravena replied · Nov 24, 2025

Thank you so much, Alex!! :D



u can't have villains exist just 2 b villains
— ShadowVyper