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*Context: this story is based on a multitude of real experiences, having raised all these creatures...Life with them is chaos, but fun XD
I love how it is kind of the opposite of the three little pigs. Although, can't the wolves just eat the pig? I want to know the ending, and if you haven't done it already, you should make it original and fun! I love it so much! The pig has character! The wolves learn to work together! Thank you for this story, and I really liked it (Said it for the 1000 time lol.) Happy Writing!
Thank you for giving this a read and review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
This is AWESOME. I love the reverse role play on the three little pigs, the wolves of course, being the victims and the pig the antagonist. It also plays on some real world aspects, using landlords and the abused power that some immature people wield. Having 3 dogs, I can totally relate to this, except I'm not a pig. Overall, this was a really cool story, capturing the personalities of dogs and pigs alike.
Hello there, and omg, thank you so much for giving this a read and review!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it
Haha, I like how this is sorta a reverse-fiction on the three little pig. It’s a fun and silly way to turn it around. Also, I assume this is based on the various collections of pets that you have in real life. Even as far as the littlest wolf looking suspiciously similar to your new husky Foxy!
I wonder…are the events of this story involving the pig torture these poor wolves an accurate depiction of your real life events? Who knows…
Either way, this is a nice little flash fiction! I think it is perfectly silly in tone and the tone/setup you use here is pretty effective!
The demon inside me also thought this sequence was perfectly funny lol. Knowing this is based on real life made me imagine a scenario where this happened to your animal friends. So on one hand NOOOO I hope your pig is okay!!! On the other, I’m sure all these insane experiences with your pets result in some great memories
Hi, thank you for reviewing this!! I'm glad you had fun with it!
And indeed, a majority of this is inspired by real life incidents! And Duchess has gotten better, buuuut...yeah, she has some bad habits when it comes to getting along with dogs XD
This was very funny and cute! I like how it's the "Three Little Pig's" but reversed roles, so instead of three pig's you have three wolfs and one very prestigious pig! I liked this little bit a lot!
I think it fits great with the title she gave herself, I had pictured it with her marching in the house. I could just see her rocking a cloak and crown since she is the supposed "Princess-Duchess"! Since you said this is based on many real-life experiences, I personally think that makes it even funnier! It's funny as a concept already, but being based off of real interactions that have happened takes the cake! As I said this was very funny and cute, it brought a smile to my face when reading it. Thanks for taking the time to read my review!Thank you so much for reviewing!! Glad you enjoyed!
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