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(For reference, in case there's confusion:)
All huskies = female
Duchess = female
Kubo = male
Lulu = female
Eggsy = male
Ozzy = male
Precious = female
Cubby and Beans = male
Smaug = male
Hi! These animals are adorable! Seeing these really makes me wish I had pets, because they're so cute! Anyway, these poems are wonderful. They all seem to accurately sum up the animal (based on both the picture, and my knowledge of the animal). They all seem like such sweet animals! I keep getting distracted by how adorable they are! Yeah, I'm not very good at reviews. But, in summary of my review, the poems are great, the animals are adorable, and just keep up your incredible work!
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed!!
MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very similar to the incredible YWS S'more Method but I have Halloween-ified it and made it spooky! My little black cat friend, Vladimir, wants to offer his opinion on your amazing literary piece:
Mystical Witch Hat - What I See, Observe, and Interpret
Vladimir could not resist reviewing this wonderful collection, hehe. Can I just say, I LOVE THIS oh my goodness. This was the cutest thing I have ever read on YWS. This collection was lovely. I enjoyed getting to know all of your extended family members greatly.
Rogue is the alpha and I love his one eyes smile XD. It seems that Kita tries to act tough but is actually just a big floof. Poppy's flower costume is perfect for her name, hehe.
Love this use of comparing her to the Big Bad Wolf. And I love continuing this theme with Duchess.
Overall, I love this collection of poems! I love the pictures as well. I think that it makes the pieces even more engaging, to be able to see these cuties as I read! Lulu and Eggsy are so cute, oh my goodness! I wonder how old Lulu is?
Vladimir’s Advice - Suggestions for Improvement
Here is a suggestion:
I notice you use quotations, but a suggestion is that you could use italics on the word rockstar
Also, the title made me think that this was going to be about furry's. Like anthropomorphic animal characters. Just letting you know because maybe a different title would convey a different expectation, hehe.
Jack O’Lanterns - My Favourite Parts and Praises
You write in a very easy-to-follow, story-like way! I really enjoyed how engaging the entire piece was, from start to finish! The pictures were adorable. This really made me smile! Thank you for making my day better!
Black Cat Cuddles - Concluding Ideas and Thoughts
Have a lovely day!
Sincerely, your friend,
Ellie (and Vladimir)
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I hope you have a spook-tastical day, filled with black cat mischief!
Hello, glad you enjoyed! Lulu is now 8 years old, so she's a senior kitty lol. Thanks for your advice, and for taking the time to read/review!
Also, I love your review format lol ~
This is not really a review but I'm so glad you decided to share your extended family with us.
I loved your descriptions of each of them, with special adorability points to Poppy, Eggsy, and the chubby beans.
I can totally see the family dynamic here and it sounds a bit rowdy but a lot of fun.
Hope you're having a great day/week!
"Rowdy but fun," you are spot-on in that assumption lol. Thanks for reading!
THIS IS SO ADORABLE!!!
Hi there, The Rebel here for a short review. I am just gonna share what I loved about your family members.
Rogue: Ah yes, the canine who looks the closest to the first pet ever domesticated by humans. I love how, although every other canine claims to be the alpha, he is said to be the alpha in the very first line of the collection, although Poppy claims it more "boldly". Sure, he doesn't look cuddly, but he is cute too.
Kita: The multiplicative inverse of Rogue! I can literally imagine his voice when he says that he is the alpha yet he is genuinely afraid of hardwood cracks XD. He adorably claims that he is the alpha - and he would have been, indeed, the alpha of cuteness.
Poppy: Poppy seems to me like someone merged Rogue and Kita and added a pint of self-confidence and pride. I also love how he is dressed in a poppy in the picture. He looks like he can take your soul and he claims the same in his poem, "boldly", if I daresay.
Duchess: Duchess sounds like the perfect antithesis to the three "big bad wolves". I love how she sounds like a shepherd tending to sheep and cattle when her master is gone. She is pompous and yet manages all the other members of her family - she deserves her name. Finally, SHE IS ADORABLE.
Kubo: Kubo looks like the older brother who takes care of his friends and siblings, but can't handle her sister. I love how he likes to "protect" his human friends from cats. I wonder how you handle cat and dog fights. As always, cute.
Lulu: Ah yes, the typical tsundere feline. She sounds to me like the perfect example of the house cat stereotype - possessive, elegant, grumpy, cute, and judgmental of strangers.
Eggsy: I liked the little backstory of Eggsy. She likes treats - as any feline should - and likes to play with her adorable doggo friends. She gives off an aura of innocence with her shiny eyes and adorable nimbleness.
Ozzy: Ah yes, the Prince of Darkness of the Black Sabbath (IIRC). The fun "Madman" who barks at the moon under Black Rain but is still completely Down to Earth. I am not good with animals, but is that a chinchilla or a rabbit? He's cute nonetheless!
Precious, Cubby, Beans: I have got just two words for them: ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE!
Smaug: I love the fact that Smaug from The Hobbit is scared of its own reflection XD. It's kind of interesting that a lizard likes glass, the ones who live over here love hiding behind stuff on walls. Despite those ravenous reptilian eyes, he is cute in his own way.
I am sorry that I didn't say much about your poetry and only awed over your family - but honestly, there's not much to say, it's perfect. I have no criticism. And I am NOT sorry for that.
P.S.: THEY ARE SO ADORABLE!!!!!
I'm glad you had fun! It's not very "serious" poetry anyway, so no worries about the lack of specific poetry reviews. Ah, and Ozzy is a chinchilla, just a little stockier than normal lol. Thank you for taking the time to read and review, much appreciated!