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this is pretty funny and cute.
I like it as a poem and I'm sure it's even better as a song. there isn't much to review, I didn't catch any mistakes and it flowed well. I don't quite get your rhyme scheme, but it sounds good as it is anyway. So, yeah, I know this isn't a good review. But while this isn't an amazing deep thought provoking poem, it is a cute romantic song. So, again, great job!
Heheh, this is such a fun piece! Considering that it was done spontaneously and in no time at all, I'd have to say that this is quite an impressive write. It's short and has some good moments to it and has this light and free sort of language.
Keep the ink flowing. 
Sounds like she really loved it!
I am going to cry. I loffles you Marco!!! <3333333
I feel so happy right now. SO HAPPY.