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Hey gentleman (I fancy you)

by Mikko


I actually hate myself for writing this because I know that I will never be able to do such a thing real life, but that's what great about writing - it doesn't have to be real. *Face/palms* 


Please let me tell you what's on my mind
men like you are hard to find
now I believe in love at first sight
let's get together and do this right

Please don't walk away just yet
yours is not a face I wish to forget
whisper your name and number in my ear
whisper something no one else should hear...

Hey gentleman, hey gentleman
I fancy you, I fancy you
hey gentleman, hey gentleman
what else can I do to
get rid of the
mere thought of you?
'Cause I fancy you

You walk with such a manly flare
and I follow the movement of your hair
as you take each bouncy stride
and I'm attracted to your handome pride

Turn away slowly if you must go
I just thought I'd let you know
if you don't feel the same, it's fine by me
but I know I won't forget you easily

Hey gentleman, hey gentleman
I fancy you, I fancy you
hey gentleman, hey gentleman
what else can I do to 
get rid of the
mere thought of you?
'Cause I fancy you

It's you I choose
so now it's win or lose
love is just a game
do you feel the same?

Hey gentleman, hey gentleman...

Hey gentleman, hey gentleman
I fancy you, I fancy you
hey gentleman, hey gentleman
what else can I do to 
get rid of the
mere thought of you?
'Cause I fancy you

I fancy you.


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walawala says...



Haha, this is cute :) Reminds me of a song I know (rather similar subject matter I would say) called 'Lady'. The bridge, though, seems a tad out of place and awkward to me...those 4 lines just don't flow very well on their own, not that it doesn't fit the whole song. If you get what I mean.

And don't worry, I wouldn't be able to do this in real life either xD




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crescent says...



I dare you to do this in real life at least once in your life. xP





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