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Wow. Good job, Mikko. I really feel you here. Thank you, for being so straight forward.
Christina...
I like the repetition in the poem. I liked it, even though I'm not the biggest poem guy myself. I thought it was simple and easy to follow, and I liked that. You did a good job rhyming, and sometimes you rhymed things I never would have thought to rhyme. Great job, keep it up!