There was a man named Nuttingworth,
He had a very greasy brow.
He invited me over for supper one day,
And he fed me his chicken ka-pow.
I wasn't sure quite what it was,
That gave it that ka-pow.
But later I learned, from his niece,
That it was the grease of his brow!
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This poem is quite amusing.
I admire how you just took an idea and turned it into a silly little poem. I really appreciate poems like this.
I am glad that you incorporated rhyme into this poem. Maybe that was the whole point of the poem, but it just makes it sound better. Less serious. Because this poem isn't serious.
I appreciate seeing poems like this, simple and light.
Keep up the good work!
Hello.
Good name choice, very traditional.This is a really interesting work. Quite unusual. The shortness definitely makes it feel like an old folk tale:
This is an intriguing detail to choose, and characterises this man as a "greasy" kind of person. Should we like him?
Who are you? More unnamed characters, but I guess this Nuttingworth guy is more important in this case?
What? Did you just use that because it rhymed? XD
No, I'm not quite sure either.
Ka-pow makes it sound very cartoon/actiony. Which does somewhat contradict with the image of a folk tale. XD
Oooh, another character. This is nicely balanced.
Ewwwwwwwwwwwww! Clever, but ewwww! XD
LOL.
You're a very funny writer
~R
Stop being so funny!
oh you are a talented poet, my friend. Very talented. 
but you could do that easily you're amazing as it is. 
However I believe you should expand this poem in order for it to reach its full potential. I was ready to die of laughter but Im still alive. I suggest adding more to this story for a more humorous poem.
Yes work on repetition and please write more
Overall good job and it was funny but I know it could be funnier.
(You must teach me your ways)
Keep writing!
I don't know if I want to expand this...I sort of put up just for poops and giggles. Perhaps if I find myself bored one day I will. Thanks for your review.
Understandable
great work!
Hello! I have come to try my hand at reviewing your poem.
This was fairly humorous. Though, I have to admit that from your description, I was expecting it to be a lot more humorous. My advice to you in this case; don't tell us that it is so funny. Let us figure it out for ourselves! It's like when everyone's saying that this one movie is arguably the best that they've ever seen, and by the time you've gotten a chance to watch it... it's not quite all that it was cracked up to be.
One thing I wasn't fond of, is that you used the same rhyming sequence twice. 'Ka-pow' and 'brow' was overused in my opinion. Especially since this is such a small poem, and there weren't any other things that had a chance to rhyme!
I liked this, but I did think that there was room for improvement. And it would be easy enough for you to do, since your quite a good writer! Keep it up!!!
See you around!
-Socks
I wrote this on a whim. I have no desire to change it. Yes I realize I rymed ka-pow with ka-pow. I am a poet rebel. Sorry I underwhelmed you. I honestly had no idea how to describe this poem. "A bit of poetry about a man who used his brow grease to marinate a chicken" kind of gives away the entire poem! Thanks for your review.
Sorry if I offended you! I was only trying to be helpful.
You did not offend me. What really offends me is the smell of fecal matter.
XD OK, that's good.