Hello this is Foxmaster!!!🦊
I loved this so much, you definitely nailed the humor part. I have some thoughts:
After Corona finally wiped humans
from the face of this earth,
there came the dawn for a new predator
who would rule this world.
actually, that sounds realistic.
They were finally free to fly away
from a long oppressed life under tyranny,
where they were just featured in menus
as- hot wings or spicy nuggets.
No more grilling, no more frying
Chickens now enjoyed freedom
from the gluttony of evil men.
Chicken mamas will worry no more
about their eggs being stolen for
the making of someone's daily bread.
I really enjoy how you make food into this, but I feel like you should've added KFC into this.
But what if it wasn't a Bat that
caused this global annihilation, instead
a double agent Chicken who worked out
a conspiracy to end this long debate
of who came first- the Chicken or the Egg?
who was the double agent Chicken double agenting against?
that is all! I liked this!
-Foxmaster
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