Hi, how you doing this is Grace for a review
Okay first things first i loved everything about the poem, it is so deep and true specially the part where it speaks about comparing yourself. It really spoke to me and made me stop comparing myself with others you really creative and a true writer. This is one of the best poems i have ever read and i am going to write it down and paste it in my bedroom as motivation. I feel it will remind me not to doubt myself.
I would just like to ask like how did you come up with the poem, did it just pop in your head. The title connects with the poem, it just summaries what the the poem is about. I agree with anne27 that it really hits your heart. I really love this poem so much it is like i can read it over and over again. I love how you telling the reader that whatever life throws at you do not feel bad but deal with it. I can see some tough love in the poem instead of telling the person what they want to hear you are telling them what they need to hear. Well about other things like grammar i am not good in that i am still learning more about that bit how this poem made me feel was overwhelming. I have feeling i am going to love your work please never stop writing because your poem really changed my perspective of life.
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