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really creative!
loved this!
Sup, DeepRoses! It's your girl, Caitlin; coming at you!
This way really cool, I'm impressed. I'm not a big fan of math (ar ANYTHING school related), but this was fun and I think I found some new ways to remember math terms. But this was a great read, and my favorite part was probably the exponents part. Don't worry about being the best, you did great, better than I ever will!
Well, that is a wrap, keep up the good work!
Hey DeepRoses!
I love math things! I thought it was great that the relationship followed the order of operations. 
Funny!
This poem is so neat.
First of all, the fourth line has a capital I- as does the last stanza at least. You might just want to make sure your capitalization choices are all consistent! Also, I think you could have a stronger connection here than multiplied- you have another stanza for that, after all. You could say, "our love is exponential" or "I'm raised to the power of you" or "let's square up" or something. I'm not really sure, but those are just some I thought of.
I think that overall, you could squeeze a few more math things in there, not just one per stanza. And I don't think it's really necessary to underline the ones you use, but that's a style choice you can make. You've got these wonderfully titled sections, and I suggest using them to their fullest! Go from subtle to conspicuous or whatever you want.
Love this poem!
-Falco
gah late response but thank you! the Parenthesis and Exponents stanzas were a bit tricky for me, which is why they aren't the best in the poem hahah. thanks again for the review <3