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I thought this was amazing!!
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This is really good and such an interesting idea! I loved the rhyme scheme because it was unforced and the half rhymes gave a broken disjointed feel which is so perfect for what you were trying to express. The break down of the structure of the stanza's also expressed this perfectly. I'm always a fan of rhetorical questions in petry because they force the reader to think about underlying meanings. I really, really enjoyed this, well done on writing (another) beautiful poem!
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Wow!I love it!That's exactly how I've been feeling for the past few months. I think it's absolutely perfect!Well done!
One last thing, do you mind if I copy it to keep it with me?
I'm looking forward to reading -and enjoying- your amazing work.
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