Hi fizzygirl here doing a review!
I don't feel this piece has any flaws it just seems perfect, I mean maybe there should have been one more comma but I think it's minor flaws add to it's charachter, and off course that's important in a good poem. It's relatable even though it might be dark and sad but it's realistic and I think you capture what many teenage pros go through at one time or another.
The poem stands out and it engages it's reader into the poem and almost forces you to read on, and of course this is good. No spelling mistakes which makes it easier to read and all grammar is excellent. Altogether I think this is an amazing poem and keep writing!
Points: 386
Reviews: 8
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