I literally made this months ago but who cares id rather not scrap it.
I’m feelin’ alright, I’m feelin’ alright
Let’s get crazy, let’s go insane, let’s go insane
Yeah! Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!
Welcome to the circus, welcome to the show
We ain’t done yet, I’ll have you know
There’s a second season, there’s a sequel
What are we waiting for, for, for, for, for!? (yeah!)
~
I bet you thought I was done for, since I settled that score, (oh yeah?)
Well it ain’t May no more, it’s a new month, I’ve come back for more (hell yeah!)
It’s another school year, yeah over here, and I’m back baby! (Oh yeah!)
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
Let’s get funky, let’s go crazy, let’s go crazy,
It’s a second season, and I left without a reason
But it ain’t over yet, I have more stories to teeeeell!
~
See, I talked to a doctor, and he said I was fine
He also said I was crazy, and as ridiculous as my behind
Oh look, I’m mixin’ up my words,
And I swear, the insanity ain’t a curse!
I ain’t trying to be dramatic, or problematic,
I just wanted to make a funky Circus Entranceeee!
Welcome to the circus, now on with the show
Let’s reel back the crowd, see who remembers me now
Let’s get funky, as nuts as we can
From my blossoms sweet toxic memory I’m baaaanned!
~
I’m a lot better now, a lot better now,
Don’t ask me how I’ve been, let’s just dance away our sins
Yeah! Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!
It’s been a while, let’s get this show up and runnin’
Got my flowers, bunched in my hand
Yes the blossom is still there, but I no longer care!
What are we waitin’ for, for, for for, for!?
~
It’s been about three months, but who really cares? (oh yeah?)
I bet you thought I was gone forever, but you shouldn’t be scared (hell yeah!)
I swear this is the same circus, I can feel it in my joints (oh yeah!)
I’m back in the circus, and I guess that’s the point
I’ve got a happy feeling, all throughout my bones
Let’s get our bodies movin’, on that dance floor!
~
See, I talked to a doctor, and he said I was fine
He also said I was crazy, and as ridiculous as my behind
Oh look, I’m mixin’ up my words,
And I swear, the insanity ain’t a curse!
I ain’t trying to be dramatic, or problematic,
I just wanted to make a funky Circus Entranceeee!
Welcome to the circus, now on with the show
Let’s reel back the crowd, see who remembers me now
Let’s get funky, as nuts as we can
From my blossoms sweet toxic memory I’m baaaanned!
~
Now, I don’t really feel like addin’ nothin’ here,
I’m back now, and that I’ve made clear
I’ve brought some new acts, so just sit tight
This show will be runnin’ all niiiight!
~
See, I talked to a doctor, and he said I was fine
He also said I was crazy, and as ridiculous as my behind
Oh look, I’m mixin’ up my words,
And I swear, the insanity ain’t a curse!
I ain’t trying to be dramatic, or problematic,
I just wanted to make a funky Circus Entranceeee!
Welcome to the circus, now on with the show
Let’s reel back the crowd, see who remembers me now
Let’s get funky, as nuts as we can
From my blossoms sweet toxic memory I’m baaaanned!
I can't believe I actually wrote this... but it's kinda funny, so I hope I don't get too much hate for it.
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Heyyy Akiraa, how ya doing?
Great piece, don’t really know the background (if there is any) love the repetition making way a few times.
Love the upbeat and almost dead-from-the-inside feel this song has, great “sarcasm” it has too!
It kinda gives a Hades feel, especially when it mentions flowers quite a bit and Persephone is the goddess of nature and flowers are associated with her a lot! The way you say
Feels even more like Hades or a psycho lol.
Overall, great song and have a good day<3333
its actually about a circus ^^. id like to say its one of my worst songs. just a silly song that i made about coming back for another school year since i was unable to post for a few months. but the perspective of greek mythology being brought into it is new. no one has mentioned that before. i might actually look closer into it. thanks!
Ahhh ok! Awwww, I like it though, it is great!!<333
Oh lol haha thanks!
Hello there, Akira! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today!
Shalt we commence with the poisoned S’more?
Top Graham Cracker - After much time in the darkness of the shadows, the circus returns from the grave to snatch up unsuspecting bypassers. The ringleader doesn’t have her head screwed on tight, but that’s alright, because she’s ready to give a fright!
Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - No recommendations here! But if you ever want to edit it, that’s about to you. I personally think that it’s fine.
Chocolate Bar - This entire song is clever. You’re starting off a new part of your “Showtime” series, yet at the same time, this is your “return” song, as you return back from hiding. It feels the same as your other works, yet there’s a certain note that makes it feel different than the others, that makes it seem more chilling…I love it! ^v^
Closing Graham Cracker - With the return of the circus show, there comes new and old horrors. The jester is long dead, but then, the ringleader still has to bring about her fire. The three-ring circus will continue on as the horrors persist! >: D
I wish you a hauntingly lovely day/night! ^v^
Thanks! I'll post when I can but it'll be a lot slower
Alright! ^v^