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RandomTalks here to leave a quick review!
This is such a beautiful song. The imageries you have used, those small symbols of childhood and innocence brings out this nostalgia in the listener and they are easily transported back to their own lost days. This song is so relatable, almost everyone can connect to it. It has so much meaning, so much love and adoration and gratitude that you can feel every implied feeling through each line.
i know you’re scared to death of heights
but i think if we jumped we could fly
with wanderlust and pixie dust
we’d travel across the sky
I really enjoyed this reference to Peter Pan, as it constituted a large part of my childhood and made me feel even more nostalgic. Even the part where they cry for not being the characters in cartoon, felt so realistic because I feel like every child has gone through that at some point in their childhood. Good job in bringing out these connections that everyone can relate to.
This poem rightfully celebrates childhood and friendship and I am absolutely sure that your friend is going to love it.
Keep writing and have a great day!
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