Though this poem is a short one, I have to admit that I was locked onto it until the very end when it finished. The description of the swimmer in the ocean gave me chills in all places. I can actually feel the narrator going through the actions of the poem. When the swimmer hits the ocean’s surface, the feel the water spraying in my face. I can feel the cold as I’m trying to fight the current. Then, I can imagine not reaching the surface and how scary that is. There’s a short film in this poem if it’s possible. I love it. There are a few poets who write poems like this, and I’m glad that you wrote it for us. Nicely done.
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