Hello, hello!
I find it a bit hard to believe that a pirate would give a blood oath to some stowaway he just met. I think you went a bit overboard (GET IT) with that one, because it was hard to swallow. He's a pirate, man! Pirates don't do that. Plus, you said that she never took down her hood, so either this pirate is an idiot or he's just too trustworthy.
As for the name coincidence, I laughed at that. I'm surprised the pirate didn't say that sorry ma'am, I'm the only Ryder pirate on this ship. He doesn't seem all that bright, this one.
And of course Salian would demand she take off her hood. Of course. I don't like that she didn't put the blood oath to use, though. What good is it if he holds her hands behind her back regardless? I suppose you have a plan, though, so let's see what happens.
Off to read more!
~Iggy
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