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FallenAngel97
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Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:36 pm
FallenAngel97 says... · Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:36 pm
If you would...
work.php?id=95778
It's a chapter in my book :)
My heart grows cold
My spirit grows weak
I'm losing my faith
I'm losing my grip...




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murtuza
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Fri Jun 08, 2012 12:14 pm
murtuza says... · Fri Jun 08, 2012 12:14 pm
Hi Heather!

I'd love to know what you think of this piece. It's a tad big, so take as much time as you wish.

When James Met Adrienne

In return, do send me anything you'd like to have reviewed as well. ^.^

Thank you! <3

Murtuza
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It's about being heard.




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Rydia
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Mon Jun 11, 2012 4:33 pm
Rydia says... · Mon Jun 11, 2012 4:33 pm
Any more requests? :)
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The light shines brightest in the darkest places.




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Karzkin
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Mon Jun 11, 2012 5:37 pm
Karzkin says... · Mon Jun 11, 2012 5:37 pm
More points for Team Gargoyle?
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EmmVeePi
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Tue Jun 12, 2012 6:23 pm
EmmVeePi says... · Tue Jun 12, 2012 6:23 pm
Would love a review of A Heroin Laced Love Story. Can be found here http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95536 Thank you much it is much appreciated.




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LadyFreeWill
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Wed Jun 13, 2012 1:23 am
LadyFreeWill says... · Wed Jun 13, 2012 1:23 am
Could you possibly find time to squeeze in a review (even if short) for chapter one of my novel "The Code of Black"? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95887 It'd be really nice, since I've been restarting it for two years now and I really want this to be the start of my final first draft :D
Thanks!
Formerly TheScratchMan.




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Raelyn723
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Wed Jun 13, 2012 1:47 am
Raelyn723 says... · Wed Jun 13, 2012 1:47 am
My friend wants some critiques on her piece but she can't be on here as much as I am, so if you have a little time would you mind reviewing hers?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95731




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Benrobertringrose
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Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:42 pm
Benrobertringrose says... · Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:42 pm
Hello, would really appreciate a review on this if possible?

work.php?id=95901

Thank you in advance! :)




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Rydia
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Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:23 pm
Rydia says... · Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:23 pm
All done :)
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~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

The light shines brightest in the darkest places.




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firepen
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Fri Jun 15, 2012 5:20 pm
firepen says... · Fri Jun 15, 2012 5:20 pm
work.php?id=95937

If you could, please review this. Don't worry if too many people are requesting though! Thank you so much!!! (I feel really bad asking!)
Please have a look at my website: www.firepen.webs.com!




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noninjaes
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Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:31 am
noninjaes says... · Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:31 am
Poetry with urgency please?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=94049
Noni Naps Through Nano
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Stories Not Otherwise My Own

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HostofHorus
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Tue Jun 19, 2012 12:33 am
HostofHorus says... · Tue Jun 19, 2012 12:33 am
Hi there! Could I bother you to review this?


work.php?id=95977
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)




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Rydia
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Sat Jun 23, 2012 8:57 pm
Rydia says... · Sat Jun 23, 2012 8:57 pm
If you post requests tomorrow, I can pretty much guarantee they'll get done before midnight ;)
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The light shines brightest in the darkest places.




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BradenPowell
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Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:16 pm
BradenPowell says... · Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:16 pm
I really need a review count bump and some tips on my new chapter.

work.php?id=96053
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Threnody
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Thu Jun 28, 2012 11:04 pm
Threnody says... · Thu Jun 28, 2012 11:04 pm
Hello! Could you please take at look at my short story, How to Break a Bridge? I would appreciate it and definitely return the favor!

Thanks,
Threnody
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~ The Little Prince~



It's like everyone tells a story about themselves inside their own head. Always. All the time. That story makes you what you are. We build ourselves out of that story.
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