Rydia's Reviews

Kitty!

I need your heeeelp. ^-^; Whenever you can get to it okay? I know you're busy.

hey could you take a look at my chapter one please? its called The First Last Stand of George T. A. Mongtomery: Chapter One
Thank you!!

Hello, Kitty. I need a lot of help with this poem I spat out yesterday. It's called This Winter and is in Other Poetry. It's very rough and I need some help smoothing it out because, if it turns out okay, I plan to turn it in to my Creative Writing teacher.

This Winter

Thank you.

If you have time, I'd love a little critique on this. Thanks so much!
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Hey, could you review the first chapter of my novel? Thanks(:


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Would you mind reviewing my Novella? It's called Ghost of Theater Two
This is the Prologue:
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This is chapter one:
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I haven't had time to post the next chapters up here yet. Thanks so much!

Hai! These have been added to my list and you should all see your reviews this week

I was wondering if you could take a look at this.
It hasn't really gotten any attention which is pretty disappointing, so I figured I'd venture over here. Only when you have the time, of course. Thanks!

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If I could get another opinion of my story, it'd be great. This is the only story I've ever written where I'm willing to re-edit until it's at its peak.

Could please review this for me? It's a dramatic poem entitled "A little bit Stronger" but I'm accepting suggestions on the title.
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Hi all! I am back to reviewing and I'm sorry for any links I missed because of the upgrades and the breakage of said links. If you want to post them again, by all means do or feel free to ask for a review on something else.

I'm going to try and do a review a day to earn my tortoisedom but so far I keep failing. I'm going to start up again tomorrow and if you give me links, this will be helpful.

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Would you review the first chapter of my story for me?

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Please and thank you.

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