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  • winterwolf0100
    Aug 6, 2022

    Happy birthdayyy!!

  • I just read back through my posted version of Traveller of Olde and I am cringing so hard. Not that my current version is any better, but still. Big ooof.

    Shady omg hai its been so long <33
    Sep 7, 2021

  • Well I sort of forgot I exist on here

  • KingLucifer
    Jan 31, 2021

    Payne are you still logging on here? I'm dummy send a friend request on discord 1 more time I just realized you were sending it.

    KingLucifer VayneInsane#1632
    Jan 31, 2021

  • Mageheart
    Aug 6, 2020

    Happy birthday!

  • FruityBickel
    Nov 13, 2019


  • SoundsOfLife
    Sep 22, 2019

    Hey there! I can't believe my computer still has the login information to get on YWS LOL.
    Everyone who sees this give Payne a warm how ya doing! :D

  • Mageheart
    Aug 6, 2019

    Happy birthday! <3

    Payne Thank you so much <3
    Aug 6, 2019

  • Yeah, I don't feel too good today.


    fatherfig I am sure you will feel better. <3 Until then I send you good vibes.
    May 13, 2019

  • Chasing Shadows - Chapter 1

    Constructive criticism welcome, as always.

  • Depression is a bitch.

    Teddybear Yup.
    Apr 1, 2019

  • I'm having that thing where I know where I want the plot to go but I need smaller plot points to connect the bigger plot points and right now I literally just have Mikey riding around on his bike doing nothing interesting because he's supposed to be a "boring" person but dear lord this is dull and I need to make something interesting happen but I have no idea what.

    Teddybear Have something interesting happen to him, but have him react in a boring way. Or, have boring stuff happen for a very small amount of time with little hints of the upcoming plot stuff (overheard bits of conversation, posters on lamp posts, little stuff like that) scattered all about. Then start your plot. Don't wait any longer than you have to, just start your freaking plot. Have your character react how a 'boring' person would react to whatever situations you put him in.
    Mar 19, 2019

    Payne That's actually amazingly inspirational. Thanks!
    Mar 23, 2019

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  • I would absolutely love to get paid as much to do my job as poorly as lawyers seem to.

    fireheartedkaratepup There's so many jobs where you do basically nothing and I'm not qualified for most of them.
    Sep 27, 2021

Some call me a legacy, others call me a hero. But I assure you, dear admirers, I am only human.
— Persistence