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May I?

Title: Dark Lies
Genre: Mystery/suspense
Link: work.php?id=98967

Thank you!
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When you have the time :3

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NIGHT is always watching...




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Hello Heather.

My Preface poem has been sitting all lonely. Would you pleasure it with your company and critique?

Many thanks.




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My name is Ashley. I found this poem among my things. It's from a few years ago. I don't remember when or why I wrote it, but I'm quite impressed with it myself and I would love your feedback on it.

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All done! I have a few things on my list for review day, though I'm off to bed after this one I'm currently working on because seriously, need sleep!

But if you want to make sure I don't run out of stuff, go ahead and request! I've probably space for another two or three and even if I don't get to them tomorrow, there's always next week ;)
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Hello i was wondering if you guys could review my first chapter of my novel. i really need some professional advice, so it would be great if you guys could review it. thank in advance. work.php?id=99215




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Hello,

I am new to this site and I have written two poems. If you would be willing to review them, I would really appreciate it :)

Thank you!




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Hi there.
I was looking for more opinions on my poem, since I've revised it a bit now. Would you please take a peek?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99409

Thank you very much.
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Hey, can you review this please? work.php?id=99796 :D
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I'm going to bed now but the last time I checked, tomorrow was still review day ;) I've got a few celebrations under way but should find time for a couple of reviews so who wants one?
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thanx
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It's my first work, and I only joined this site an hour ago...

But apparently, there's a reciprocal system in place for reviews? Kind of a mutual backscratching system?

I would greatly appreciate it if someone could offer further information on this. Also, I would be grateful if you could look over this first piece of writing, cobbled together in an hour or so.

Many thanks.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=100271
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Hey Rydia! Would you mind reviewing this for me? work.php?id=94750
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