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I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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Can you please review tis if you have time?
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Hey, would you please have a go at my poem?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post865211.html#p865211

Thank you dear :)
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades






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All caught up now, except for the last but I'm about to do that so... next please! :D
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please and thank you!
So, a dyslexic man walks into a bra....




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Hi-ya! Review please? Thanks!
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If you want to be a great writer, don't think about what you're going to write, just write it.

I'm a huge fan of writers block! When your brain halts, with no direction for where you should go, it gives you threads. All you have to do is pull and unravel the story you're meant to write.




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I don't know if your scary schedule has review-time penciled in, lol, but if you wouldn't mind, please?
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If you have time, Kitty, would you look at this poem?
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.




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:) All done!
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Hi Kitty,
I don't know if you do novel's at all... is there a place people post saying they want to review novels? lol. Anyways, if you're interested in doing a few chapters that would be awesome, rip em' to shreds, that's why I'm here right?

novel.php?id=1142

~Dakota Knight
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Rosette Christopher

Looking for peeps to review my novel:)

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If you are not to busy I would love a review for chapter 4 of my novel novel.php?id=1419
It most likely will not make sense out of context so you might want to skim the first three chapters.
I realize that is asking a lot so don't feel obligated to read all of them. I would appreciate a review on an earlier chapter if you would rather do that or you could read chapter four out of context?

Thank you in advance. If you want a review in return (which I will be happy to do) then just post it at the end of your review or send it to me. :)
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I LOVE YOU

REVIEW THIS

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please?
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Hey, I posted the prologue of my story on here and I'd really appreciate a review. :D I got like two, and I changed it up a bit since then. It be awesome if you could just give me a couple of suggestions. thanks!
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