If you wouldn't mind. I've re-written the first chapter of my novel in the first person because I felt like I was losing my main character's personality when written in the third. This is part 1 of the chapter, wouldn't mind a quick peek.
Hey, I'm pretty new to this site and I just posted a rewritten version of an earlier story that I would like some advise on.There is heavy cursing, but I think it's essential to the characterization. work.php?id=96809
I'm changing my status to NOT ACCEPTING for the moment as my laptop is broken so I have very little access to the site. As soon as this problem has been resolved, I will catch up with my backlog and then start accepting again. Thank you for your understanding xx
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