BLESS THE CIRCLE OF LIFE [but don't dare speak of the dead]

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BLESS THE CIRCLE OF LIFE

(but don't dare speak of the dead)


on the nature of movement, change, interconnectedness
and the breaking down of that delicate, interrelated structure of reality

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Last edited by Euphory on Thu Mar 23, 2023 11:41 am, edited 1 time in total.
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There are diamond rings hanging from willow branches,
tree roots held so tight they can brave avalanches.
There are cracks on glass like spider webs like pulsing veins-
and amidst this life, there lies my broken bonds and severed chains.
bas ek rahe mera kaam ishq,
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mera kaam ishq




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bas ek rahe mera kaam ishq,
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<.< went scrounging around to find your NaPo thread, tried to look through your posts to find it and find a gajillion threads that were not NaPo and then you commented on so many other NaPo threads i just about squealed with joy when i at last found your thread since i love your writing <33
True love is the greatest thing in the world
except for a nice mlt
Wonderin' if your heart's still open
And if so I wanna know what time it shuts

Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing
To tell you that you're something else

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@LuxLuthor I- oh. My. Gosh. YOU HAVE SINGLEHANDEDLY MADE MY ENTIRE WEEK WITH THIS COMMENT! I'm honored you would go to all that trouble just to find my thread, and to hear that you love my writing- I- odpfkroforor THANK YOU! <3333 SO! MUCH! <3 it means the world :smt049
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1. dreamrot in my broken tooth
Last edited by Euphory on Sun Aug 20, 2023 9:52 am, edited 1 time in total.
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euph i love this poem so much! it's dark and edgy, but so carefully crafted. i love the descriptions you give of this characters' surroundings and feelings. amazing start to your napo! <3
previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds




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@momonster MOMO! <3 your comment just made me shriek with excitement! :smt007 thank you so, so much! <333 (and look, now we're non-buttonist buddies!)
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Love the word-choice, such a strong and bold start! Looking forward to your thread E! <3
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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THANK YOU, FRIEND! <3 much appreciated!
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2. HERE, WE ARE PREDAWN
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Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)