wamdog321

I think this is great. I think that this is very true. Alot of people when I talk get ticked. So you described life perfectly. And thats what I like ...

I think this is kind of mean. I think it is also harsh at the end. I think you should not say shut up. Instead you can put so be ...

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Hey you are not the only one who feels like that. I love your poem. This poem evidently reflects that the speaker has passed through a terrible experience. This can ...

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I was definitely drawn in to reading your poem by your title. Smoke and Mirrors. It made me think of a magician! An illusionist! And the person your poem speaks ...

I think this was alright. I think the poem can flow better if you added a rhyme scheme. You were very abstract and creative while writing this. There are some ...

I love this poem. I think this is really cool. I love that all the phrases always start with we. However there are somethings we need to fix. Ha Ha ...

I think this is too depressing. You need to make it not so sad and cruel. Also there are some thing you can fix and make better. First the picture ...

I think this is ok. First I think in the first sentence you should put this is my english journal and nothing more. If you put that It will flow ...