unsocialbutterfly

Hey! I like this :) I just saw a few things you could fix: "Why am I the blame for this?" I think you meant "Why am I to blame ...

Hey sweetheart. I totally understand the need to get things off your shoulders. Everyone has done bad things. It may seem worse to you because you're catholic but God will ...

Hey vampyIrishgirl, I'm so sorry. This isn't because I brought it up is it? Your poem is really good. It makes me feel really awful. It's really beautiful. I'm so ...

This is beautiful. You don't like poetry??? Anyway I saw a few grammar mistakes which were probably accidents. For instance you said go instead of got. But it's beautiful, and ...

This is a nice idea but... Mk... 1. It needs to be in poetry form if it's a poem! This: To swing along with my gentleman the strong and cold ...

Hey! This is good, it needs a little work grammar wise, but the idea especially is good. This: Not one single sound will befall your lips. Should be: Not one ...

I agree with Renn, it needs to be in poetry form if it's a poem! It is pretty though. You just kinda need to figure out what you wanna do ...

Hey! This is very, very short. I think there's a good idea here but I don't know... It's written well, I don't see any kind of errors. I kinda just ...

Hey! This is nice, thought provoking. I like your name by the way, "writingmyheartout," that's cool. Anyway your poems good, the format drives me nuts so fix it ASAP ;) ...

Hey! I like this, it's cute and I totally get the love at first sight feeling. It is, as they said, short but sweet :) in the last line I ...

I'm very glad I read the comments first because right away I was like, "welp first of all it doesn't look right," haha. Next thought: This is nice, simple. Young ...

This is good. It's sad, it makes me feel bad for you :/ But here's the little things I saw: Whose little hand held your even smaller It should be: ...

This is nice, I'd like to actually hear it sung :) The only things I saw were: You tell you: Please just let it go Let the ashes blow. I ...

Hey! This is nice! I do agree with what Max said, it does need some editing, but I like it. I like the idea of it especially, this world needs ...

Hey Ela, this is a nice poem, I like it. Your writing is really beautiful.