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Hi. : D
So, I think this was pretty good, but I'm not quite sure why it's in the poem section. It's got poetic feel to it, it sounds like poetry, but doesn't really look like it. If you could make it into stanzas and put capitalization, that would be great! The spelling's good. Keep writing!
>_<
PeaceLuvPoems
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Hi. : D
So, I think this was pretty good, but I'm not quite sure why it's in the poem section. It's got poetic feel to it, it sounds like poetry, but doesn't really look like it. If you could make it into stanzas and put capitalization, that would be great! The spelling's good. Keep writing!
>_<
PeaceLuvPoems
Hey! This is nice! I do agree with what Max said, it does need some editing, but I like it. I like the idea of it especially, this world needs great men in my personal opinion
I say put your faith and trust in God and do all those things! 
Very good. Just a few suggestions..
1. I needs to be capitalized a lot in your poem.
2. It would be easier to read broken into stanzas
3. More detail about what you could do would help bring the poem alive.
Very good overall, no spelling mistakes I saw. Keep up the good work, buddy!