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I really like this! I like the perspective you too upon living, dying, and the reason you are here. I do have a couple kind suggestions!
In the title - Dying*
And could you use a different format? This is hard to read, for me at least.
Very nice!
Hahaha this makes me think of a semidepressing Dr. Seuess poem. I believe this really maks you think. In order to trully be alive we first need a reason to live. How alive are you when you do not know your purpose? I have yet to find my true purpose and I believe it is writing. Is it? I do not know. Could it be? It very well may be. I would like to make a remark that your lines should be separated to their own lines. Other than that I love it.
Hey! This is nice, thought provoking. I like your name by the way, "writingmyheartout," that's cool. Anyway your poems good, the format drives me nuts so fix it ASAP
and "dieing" is actually spelled "dying." Nice piece! 
Once again sorry about the spacing problems. I'm working on it.