Change

by ela00051u

  • Poetry

Published October 17, 2012

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Change,
Once friends, now strangers at bay,
Morning’s bright sun, to night’s sombre grey,
An icy winter to a serene spring,
A petite seed to a large growth ring,
Once lovers now passer’s by,
A frightening storm no more blue sky,
 
Change,
Baby’s fragile steps, become a man’s stride,
Still ocean water, by moonlight a rough tide,
A gush of wind turns direction,
One stamp turns into a whole collection,
A misjudged now covered in fame,
All happened because of change.
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unsocialbutterfly wrote a review Review · Oct 18, 2012

Hey Ela, this is a nice poem, I like it. Your writing is really beautiful.

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ela00051u replied · Oct 18, 2012

thanks loadds

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lydvarn wrote a review Review · Oct 17, 2012

Well this is good!! I read it because it has 81 words... call me weird but that's my favourite number!!!
It's certainly a clever poem, and all the rhymes fit really well. Layout wise, there's a space between 'change' and one paragraph, and not on the next. it doesn't really matter, but it would just be neater.
Interesting structure!!! Love this, well done!!!

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ela00051u commented Comment · Oct 17, 2012

Please comment on anything you like or find a problem thanks!!

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ela00051u replied · Oct 18, 2012

thanks for the likes lydvarn and justlittleoleme



It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small.
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