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tkpejb

  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Jazz Band

    Hello, hello, hello! So I know it's just something you thought of on the fly but it's pretty interesting. I shall try to review it and give you suggestions! Goodness ...

    Feb 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Just another love poem

    Hello, hello, hello! So as I said, I was going to read your piece, and I shall review it as well. I'm kinda a little OCD about grammar so I'm ...

    Feb 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Eyes In The Sea

    Hello, hello, hello! I might as well get straight to it! Just read this first ----> As a fellow poet myself, I know that not all reviews are helpful in ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: (late) Valentine's day poem

    Hello, hello, hello! This piece is wonderful, it is going to be hard to write a helpful review for it but I shall try anyway! When you said it was ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Silence

    Hello, hello, hello! I would like to start off, even though I'm a few days late, by saying WELCOME!! I hope you are enjoying the wonders this site has to ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Teen Fiction Re: Wasted, Broken, Gone

    Hello hello hello! This is a really good piece you have here! There are just some things that you should work on. Wasted(I think it would sound better and more ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Health Re: Foresight last

    Hello hello hello! This is a good piece of work you have here! There are only some minor things I think should be changed, really it's just grammar stuff. I'll ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Breakfast

    Hello hello hello! There's nothing really to review about this piece here, it is absolutely fantastic, yet I will due to the high volume of the green room right now! ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Yet we fear

    Hello, hello, hello! I absolutely love this piece! The spelling and use of language is fantastic. Your grammar and structure, the way you broke the stanzas up and each line, ...

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Be Rad, Not Sad

    Hello, hello, hello! There isn't anything that I think needs to be changed or fixed. The spelling and grammar is all good. I liked everything about this poem. It definitely ...

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Heaven on Earth

    Hello, hello, hello! I absolutely love this poem!!! ^_^ I can relate to this so much. I think everything in this poem is perfect. I would just change one thing. ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Just Another Face

    Hello, hello, hello! I may not be the first to review this piece of work, yet I still shall try to give you a fantastic review! :) I really enjoyed ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: It Is Incredible

    Hello, hello, hello! This is a lovely piece you have written here. There really isn't anything that I can say should be changed or fixed about it; everything seems perfectly ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Ding, Dong, Ding

    Hello, tkpejb back for another review on your wondrous work! Everything seems to be good with this piece there is just one thing I would like to suggest you change. ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: In Search Of The Summer Sun

    Hello, hello, hello! This is a very lovely piece you have created here! The grammar, spelling and word choice is all swell. There is one small thing I would change. ...

    Jan 26, 2014


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