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Re: Jazz Band
Hello, hello, hello! So I know it's just something you thought of on the fly but it's pretty interesting. I shall try to review it and give you suggestions! Goodness ...
Feb 28, 2014 -
Re: Just another love poem
Hello, hello, hello! So as I said, I was going to read your piece, and I shall review it as well. I'm kinda a little OCD about grammar so I'm ...
Feb 28, 2014 -
Re: My Eyes In The Sea
Hello, hello, hello! I might as well get straight to it! Just read this first ----> As a fellow poet myself, I know that not all reviews are helpful in ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: (late) Valentine's day poem
Hello, hello, hello! This piece is wonderful, it is going to be hard to write a helpful review for it but I shall try anyway! When you said it was ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: Silence
Hello, hello, hello! I would like to start off, even though I'm a few days late, by saying WELCOME!! I hope you are enjoying the wonders this site has to ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: Wasted, Broken, Gone
Hello hello hello! This is a really good piece you have here! There are just some things that you should work on. Wasted(I think it would sound better and more ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: Foresight last
Hello hello hello! This is a good piece of work you have here! There are only some minor things I think should be changed, really it's just grammar stuff. I'll ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: Breakfast
Hello hello hello! There's nothing really to review about this piece here, it is absolutely fantastic, yet I will due to the high volume of the green room right now! ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: Yet we fear
Hello, hello, hello! I absolutely love this piece! The spelling and use of language is fantastic. Your grammar and structure, the way you broke the stanzas up and each line, ...
Feb 8, 2014 -
Re: Be Rad, Not Sad
Hello, hello, hello! There isn't anything that I think needs to be changed or fixed. The spelling and grammar is all good. I liked everything about this poem. It definitely ...
Feb 8, 2014 -
Re: Heaven on Earth
Hello, hello, hello! I absolutely love this poem!!! ^_^ I can relate to this so much. I think everything in this poem is perfect. I would just change one thing. ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Just Another Face
Hello, hello, hello! I may not be the first to review this piece of work, yet I still shall try to give you a fantastic review! :) I really enjoyed ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: It Is Incredible
Hello, hello, hello! This is a lovely piece you have written here. There really isn't anything that I can say should be changed or fixed about it; everything seems perfectly ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Ding, Dong, Ding
Hello, tkpejb back for another review on your wondrous work! Everything seems to be good with this piece there is just one thing I would like to suggest you change. ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: In Search Of The Summer Sun
Hello, hello, hello! This is a very lovely piece you have created here! The grammar, spelling and word choice is all swell. There is one small thing I would change. ...
Jan 26, 2014
