Be Rad, Not Sad

by InfinityAndBeyond

Published February 8, 2014

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The original copy of this poem can be found at:

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/04/22/dress-for-your-shape_n_3131220.html


Please be advised that the link does contain strong language that may not be appropriate for all.

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MysteryMe
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MysteryMe commented Comment · Feb 9, 2014

This..... is..... awesome XD. Made me smile, great job with this!

This is, without a doubt, the funniest poem I have ever seen here. I'd pick my favorite line, but I love them all.

Keep writing!!!!

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Willard
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Willard wrote a review Review · Feb 8, 2014

Hey, Strange here, and I have a review for you!
I loved this for its quirky humor. It made me feel good at the end. I like dark humor more than anything, but this made me laugh. It made me feel good, and I thank you for writing this poem. My favorite part is the whole poem, but my favorite part of the poem is
"Are you human shaped?"
For some reason, that's hilarious. This has to be one of the funniest poems I've seen here in a while. Congrats, I give you a round of applause!
I really did enjoy the message you gave. Be happy, be rad. Nothing's better than being RAD. I use that word often, and I'm glad a poem used that word.
Overall, I loved this.
Strange gives you...
9.0/10
Good job,
Keep writing
Stay groovy

turtlethatroars wrote a review Review · Feb 8, 2014

Hello, hello, hello!
There isn't anything that I think needs to be changed or fixed. The spelling and grammar is all good. I liked everything about this poem. It definitely made me chuckle and smile.
My favorite part is

Perhaps shave just one leg so the other can feel the breeze.

It's my favorite part due to the fact that I thought it to be very comical.

Honestly everything about this is great and true, it's something that a lot of people should read :)

Keep writing,
tkpejb

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rhiasofia
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rhiasofia commented Comment · Feb 8, 2014

*Clap* pause *clap* pause *clap* pause

Bravo. It needed to be said. It needed to be shared. It needs to be read by all, and followed to a tee. Really funny, you got me smiling, which is great. I'm not sure I'd really consider it a poem, per se, but who cares, it's great. So yeah, I'm not going to critique it like I usually critique poetry cause it's really a great point to be made, and I think that was your main purpose, which was done fantastically.



Men occasionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry off as if nothing had happened.
— Winston Churchill