stupidiot92

This is a book that i have been working on and it is connected to my freind, Nick Neuhoff's, book series The Line I don't think its that good but ...

Here is chapter 2 of my book please comment I NEED IT there is an edited version out there somewhere look for it Chapter 2 The Meeting As Rone woke ...

Here is the 3rd chapter of my book please comment PLEASE Chapter 3 The Rescue “It’s been a while and Makajeh hasn’t answered us.” “I’m beginning to think he’ll take ...

Here is chap 4 of my book its shorter than the others please comment Chapter 4 The Dream Rone woke up and noticed two things. First, his body was very ...

Here is the last chapter i have typed up so far please comment i am proud of it Chapter 5 The Gift “Did Sendoma say where he was going or ...

The Cries of War BY: MICHAEL RIST War is a sorrowful thing For in it are the cries of battle Which brings fear to chaos. The cries of war have ...

This is my first chapter that i have edited please comment Chapter 1 The Invasion On a heavily forested island called Pire Island, a thief and a murderer run from ...

This is my sixth chapter that i just wrote so it isn't that good SO PLEASE COMMENT

This is my 7th chapter i am relly pleased with where this book is headed PLEASE COMMENT Chapter 7 The Betrayal “Ah, Sendoma, my son, welcome,” bellowed Grishtog across the ...

I introduce a new character in this one and i would appreciate a character impression on her PLEASE COMMENT Chapter 8 Ihsanak Anso Sendoma woke up with a disgusting taste ...

here is my ninth chapter ithink the diologue in the beginning is a little bit...not right PLEASE COMMENT Chapter 9 That Was Easy After the leaving the company of Sendoma, ...

here is the tenth chapter tell me what you think Garak so far COMMENT PLEASE Chapter 10 Egamulla Eniah Sendoma woke up and walked out to the main hall where ...

this is my 11th chapter it is pretty small but i think it is a good one PLEASE COMMENT Chapter 11 The Cursed Spell Sendoma had been up for at ...

here is chapter two edited hope you like it Chapter 2 The Meeting When Rone woke up he couldn’t remember anything except he had a pain in his ankle and ...

Death Showers This is an issue i feel strongly about even though it isn't a huge issue. Thanks to the band System of a Down i have decided to do ...

I am not very good at the rhyming part of poetry but i have many ideas i would like put into poetry. PLEASE COMMENT The Fields of Indiana The feilds ...

This is a poem that i made up on the spot. I am not good at rhyming ot rhythm. I made more rhyming in this poem than my others. Please ...

This actually happened. This is pretty much the story that happened not to long ago. So enjoy. The Drunken Brother One night while I was on vacation, I was sitting ...

Someone please Cirt my work. I haven't gotten any crit in a while. The title of my book that i am working on is The Line: Re-appearing(the title of this ...

Prologue Ah, death. The thing many fear because they think it is the end of all life. Some want because they believe they will see loved ones that have already ...

Chapter 2 A Hero’s Death After I roared, I charged the two half dragons. The shorter one flung himself at me, but I knocked him off to the side and ...

Prologue February 19, 2008 It’s my first archaeological excavation fresh out of college. We’re in Mexico in a village that is a few miles away from a bog where a ...

I've already posted these but they have been up for a while and only 40 people looked at em and no one posted anything so im hoping this set does ...

still need help with rhyme and rhythm i am not too good at those The Most Beautiful Eyes As I walked a lonely path, I ran into an eye-catching girl. ...

Chapter 4 Some Help I stood up and turned around because the voice had come from behind me. I saw that the woman was finally up. However, I could tell ...

Chapter 5 A Grim Sight When we finally got to the town, it was a macabre sight. Bodies were burning, some were still bleeding, most weren’t even full bodies, many ...

Chapter 6 Rude Hosts She looked at me, sighed, and said, “I think its best if you stay in the outskirts, at least for now.” I nodded reluctantly, turned my ...

Chapter 7 A Curious Gift While I was asleep, I had an incredibly strange dream. At first I was just standing in darkness. There was absolutely no light, until a ...

Sleeping Angel Dedicated to Arlene H. Rist, my mother. When you were awake You were as lively As a waterfall. Your laughs were as Good as the sound of gold ...

An Epic To Last It’s happened before. Can it happen again? It didn’t work out before, Will it work out now? I wasn’t ready then, But am I ready now? ...

Chapter 1 Moonlit Rescuer Moonlight pierced through the cloudless night sky to illuminate the small, deciduous forest around the silhouette. He walked slowly along the dirt road carrying a single ...

This prologue is somewhat blah compared to some of my others so it will be edited massively, but I still welcome ideas. Hopefully once my muse hits I'll be able ...

Road to DarknessMy first blood. The twelve men who murdered my parents just for some free snacks. I enjoyed sinking the axe into the decrepit husks of their bodies. The ...