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Re: Silhouette
Hi slubbs here with a review:D First of all, dayummmm I loved this deep poem! Every word you used was meaningful, it all built up the poem perfectly. I like ...
Jun 16, 2021 -
Re: Love Yourself: A Poem
Hi slubbs here with a short review! :D I liked this poem a lot! It was super meaningful, you captured the concept perfectly and explained the beauty life has to ...
Jun 15, 2021 -
Re: Breaking Up With Imaginary You
Slubbs here with a review :D I loved this so much! It was absolutely smashing! The flow was perfect, I didn’t stumble at all. This was such a capturing poem, ...
Jun 14, 2021 -
Re: I'm Not Planning On Finishing This Because My Attention Span Is Bad
Hello slubbs with a review :D I found it to be a captivating introduction. I like how you set the narrator in their teenage years and explained the cold setting. ...
Jun 13, 2021 -
Re: The Cafe
Slubbs here with a review :D This was a fascinating piece! It was so elegant and dreamy word by word. You painted a picture in my eyes. The only thing ...
Jun 12, 2021 -
Re: Suicide
Slubbs here with a small review. This poem is deep! I like it, it’s so heavy and meaningful. You truly captured the consequences of one who takes their life away. ...
Jun 11, 2021 -
Re: Disappointment
Slubbs here with a short review. This was absolutely fantastic, it was so creative and incredibly detailed! You created something that the reader can’t stop reading, you won’t be able ...
Jun 10, 2021 -
Re: The Reality of our Memorys
Hello, slubbs here to review your fantastic work. Let’s dive into it. This was a very unique story. I’m going to go through the rough patches first. So I agree ...
Jun 9, 2021 -
Re: The Assassin
Hi slubbs here with a review! This was a neat short story. I like the concept of the wife hiring him to kill. :D Anyhow let’s jump into the juicy ...
Jun 7, 2021 -
Re: Why do we love a place?
Hi slubbs here with a review:D I liked this poem a lot it was an interesting concept. The wording had a really nice flow, that’s hard to do without rhyming ...
Jun 7, 2021 -
Re: An Ode to YWS but with Laundry Detergent
Slubbs here with a review. I absolutely loved this I don’t have a poor thing to say about it. You put so much creativity in your works it brings a ...
Jun 6, 2021 -
Re: Forever, And Ever
Hi slubbs here with a review. I really liked this poem! Your word choices were fabulous, “Tangling around my torso, Like vines.” This is such a good simile! You can ...
Jun 5, 2021 -
Re: Do You Remember?
Slubbs here with a review. This poem was incredibly relatable! I’ve become slightly more distant from my friends because of the pandemic. The beginning of the poem was good. I ...
Jun 3, 2021 -
Re: Immortality
Hi, slubbs here with a short review. I loved this it made me think of immorality in another way. “But what people fail to realize is you would never have ...
Jun 3, 2021 -
Re: Sister, Sister
Hello I loved this short story 10/10! The beginning was amazing, it made the reader want to keep reading as you built up detail in your writing. Your choice of ...
Jun 1, 2021
