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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silhouette

    Hi slubbs here with a review:D First of all, dayummmm I loved this deep poem! Every word you used was meaningful, it all built up the poem perfectly. I like ...

    Jun 16, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Love Yourself: A Poem

    Hi slubbs here with a short review! :D I liked this poem a lot! It was super meaningful, you captured the concept perfectly and explained the beauty life has to ...

    Jun 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Breaking Up With Imaginary You

    Slubbs here with a review :D I loved this so much! It was absolutely smashing! The flow was perfect, I didn’t stumble at all. This was such a capturing poem, ...

    Jun 14, 2021
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: I'm Not Planning On Finishing This Because My Attention Span Is Bad

    Hello slubbs with a review :D I found it to be a captivating introduction. I like how you set the narrator in their teenage years and explained the cold setting. ...

    Jun 13, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Cafe

    Slubbs here with a review :D This was a fascinating piece! It was so elegant and dreamy word by word. You painted a picture in my eyes. The only thing ...

    Jun 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Suicide

    Slubbs here with a small review. This poem is deep! I like it, it’s so heavy and meaningful. You truly captured the consequences of one who takes their life away. ...

    Jun 11, 2021
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Disappointment

    Slubbs here with a short review. This was absolutely fantastic, it was so creative and incredibly detailed! You created something that the reader can’t stop reading, you won’t be able ...

    Jun 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: The Reality of our Memorys

    Hello, slubbs here to review your fantastic work. Let’s dive into it. This was a very unique story. I’m going to go through the rough patches first. So I agree ...

    Jun 9, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Assassin

    Hi slubbs here with a review! This was a neat short story. I like the concept of the wife hiring him to kill. :D Anyhow let’s jump into the juicy ...

    Jun 7, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why do we love a place?

    Hi slubbs here with a review:D I liked this poem a lot it was an interesting concept. The wording had a really nice flow, that’s hard to do without rhyming ...

    Jun 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: An Ode to YWS but with Laundry Detergent

    Slubbs here with a review. I absolutely loved this I don’t have a poor thing to say about it. You put so much creativity in your works it brings a ...

    Jun 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Forever, And Ever

    Hi slubbs here with a review. I really liked this poem! Your word choices were fabulous, “Tangling around my torso, Like vines.” This is such a good simile! You can ...

    Jun 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Do You Remember?

    Slubbs here with a review. This poem was incredibly relatable! I’ve become slightly more distant from my friends because of the pandemic. The beginning of the poem was good. I ...

    Jun 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Immortality

    Hi, slubbs here with a short review. I loved this it made me think of immorality in another way. “But what people fail to realize is you would never have ...

    Jun 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Sister, Sister

    Hello I loved this short story 10/10! The beginning was amazing, it made the reader want to keep reading as you built up detail in your writing. Your choice of ...

    Jun 1, 2021


You are beautiful because you let yourself feel, and that is a brave thing indeed.
— Shinji Moon